tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post1023775089951301666..comments2024-03-18T15:17:26.003-05:00Comments on l'astronave: 1 Among ManyFrescahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15323129046492056942noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post-43488382871559822452009-06-20T05:10:18.152-05:002009-06-20T05:10:18.152-05:00I want to go again, when it's at the cheap-o t...I want to go again, when it's at the cheap-o theaters, so I'll go with you then, if you haven't seen it yet by then. I think you'd like it.<br />I still haven't seen Coraline!<br /><br />Interesting you say I was kind to Mr. F. I've tried hard for years to practice that with him... and it's been hard.<br />I might write some more about that guy and his philosophy of life. It led to a painful illumination at one point in my life.Frescahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15323129046492056942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post-56054952851262267612009-06-20T01:32:03.042-05:002009-06-20T01:32:03.042-05:00I still haven't seen UP! I must do that as soo...I still haven't seen UP! I must do that as soon as possible.<br />You are very charitable here to the person who lectured you, based on one joking remark. Or maybe it's not charity but lovingkindness.momohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12149328149132703479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post-45973588247031568792009-06-19T21:06:32.077-05:002009-06-19T21:06:32.077-05:00OOOh! Nice Nancy!
I love tight compact poems like...OOOh! Nice Nancy! <br />I love tight compact poems like that---and I can hear this--and even, by association, *smell* the cool rain hitting the hot Chicago streets...<br />Yes, the second take is an improvement.<br />I had to look up legato--I see it's a musical term and I don't quite get it, but so what? The poem works well anyway.<br />More, please. <br /><br />Will look at your photos soon too.Frescahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15323129046492056942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post-89863418889442403302009-06-19T11:38:14.087-05:002009-06-19T11:38:14.087-05:00It doesn't pay not to let a poem simmer at lea...It doesn't pay not to let a poem simmer at least a little while. Here's the better cooked version.<br /><br />City Rain<br /><br />lone bird chirps alarm<br />gray black legato thunder <br />siren, lightning, rain!Nancynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7229875339727095184.post-34733696373931770932009-06-19T10:34:07.297-05:002009-06-19T10:34:07.297-05:00Fresca, love the new photos, especially the cups a...Fresca, love the new photos, especially the cups and forks! I just put some up, too. Go look, por favor.<br />Also, here's a haiku I wrote just for fun. <br /><br /><br />City Rain<br /><br />lone bird chirping loud<br />in patchwork sky thunder rolls<br />siren, lightning, rain!Nancynoreply@blogger.com